I couldn’t decide between three or four owl rating for this book, as you can see. About 75% of the way through I was almost set on a four owl rating, but then the cliffhanger at the end threw me off a bit along with the words “Coming Soon — Book 2 of Seeing Red Series.” That’s not to say I didn’t enjoy this book. It just didn’t expect this book to turn into a series, and I can’t conceive what the sequel would be about. Still, this was without a doubt a page turner, filled with suspense, intrigue, and LOTS of sexual tension.
A Brief Synopsis:
Jillian Stone, Oliver and Alexander Jacobs are an unusual group of 22-year-olds. They were raised on a deserted island under the guardianship of a woman named Helen. After twelve years they’re rescued and go their separate ways, only to be reunited years later at the funeral of their beloved Helen. A love triangle erupts between them. Jillian struggles with the decision of which of the twins she should be with, all the while trying to comprehend her psychic abilities that resurfaced from her time living on the island. At the same time, a mystery unravels through Helen’s old journals. Jill begins to uncover why she ended up on the island in the first place and whether she’s in danger now back in the real world.
Now Let’s Break It Down
Despite its categorization under ‘paranormal romance’ on Amazon, I personally would define Seeing Red as a romance with a mystery twist. Unlike most romance novels, there are two main story lines in this book: a love triangle (and for a hot second a love square) plus an added level of mystery, distinguishing this book from your typical love story. Each story line integrates a level of suspense into the novel. The intense love triangle is one reason you want to keep reading — to find out who Jillian will choose. The perpetual question going through my head was, is it going to be Oliver? Alexander? Halston sure knows how to build sexual tension well. There are so many hot and cold moments between the characters, especially Jillian and Alexander.
There isn’t really one main character in this story, as it rotates between three points of view: Jillian and the twins Oliver and Alexander. Despite this, Jillian still feels like the protagonist as she is the target of every male character’s affections and the individual the mystery revolves around. That said, I loved every character except for hers. Especially next to her kind, generous, selfless, good-natured southern belle of a roommate Heather, Jillian comes across as very selfish woman. She’s entirely too comfortable leading on three men at the same time, two of whom genuinely worship her.
This is when the love triangle starts to get on my nerves as much as it keeps me hooked. At halfway through the book, Jill’s mind had gone back and forth between the guys so often she began to drive me mad. Can anyone be more indecisive? Or dissect a situation more? Just pick a guy already and take everyone out of their misery! But still I kept reading through Jill’s long-winded rants and rationalizations because in the end, she does pick a man. The reader isn’t left hanging — in regards to the romantic story line.
My only other complaint aside from Jill’s frustrating character is how slow the book starts off. The first few chapters feel more like a memoir simply because there’s a lot of telling over showing, a lot of listing “Then this, then that.” This type of writing is almost unavoidable when catching the reader up on a character’s background, or to convey long periods of time passing. Once the book gets going however, the pace picks up and the slow start is history.
I truly recommend this book for anyone who enjoys a good romance and occasional mystery. Sure there are a few typos and the writing isn’t too eloquent at times but that’s not why you would read this book anyway. If that’s the reading experience you seek, I suggest you pick up a Brontë novel.