Heather Marie Adkins is a born story teller. There’s no debating that with regards to this book. A good balance of description, consistent action and likable characters all carry the story along agreeably. That is, for most of the book. What disappointments me most about reading a story is when it starts off so strongly and I’m loving every bit of it — but then something goes awry. It gets weird. For me, that’s what happened with The Temple.
First, I want to point out the strong points about this book. The rising conflict is perfectly set up. Vale Avari is a small town U.S.A. turned small town U.K. female protagonist who recently moved overseas for an unusual job — to help guard a temple dedicated to the goddess Cerridwen (worshipped by Wiccans today). Vale has superhuman powers along with the other temple protectors, one of which she becomes romantically involved with. The temple is protected at night from the ghost-filled gang of men and wild horses (picture the Headless Horseman). The legend has haunted the town for centuries, and the residents blame it for the lost lives of several of its inhabitants. While residents believe in this myth, our protagonist thinks a serial killer is in fact committing the murders and using this ‘Wild Hunt’ as a coverup.
I liked this premise. I was into it. Though it isn’t evident from the synopsis, the book was starting to feel like its own fun genre — a paranormal romance crime thriller. But as the story moved on, I don’t think this premise was executed that well. About 60% way through the book, to be specific. At this point the two genres that were coelesced so well earlier on — crime thriller and paranormal romance — become separated. The two concepts even get their own climaxes and resolutions.
I enjoyed the part I thought was the resolution, when I thought the ‘bad guy’ was caught. And sometimes this works really well in literature and film — when you think the bad guy is gone, but then you realize they didn’t catch the right person because bad things are still happening. The Temple did not succeed at the second-ending concept. Mainly because the second climax/resolution is so bizarre, so suddenly very supernatural with a scene in the temple involving a living breathing goddess coming to life unexpectedly and solving the world’s problems.
Aside from the incongruous plot, my only other critique of this book is the neat, too-tidy of an ending. I honestly believe the book would’ve been better without the bow-tie last chapter. Nothing was learned about the characters at this point, and it didn’t move the plot along any further. I don’t need to know how happy the characters are and how well they’re doing months after the conflict resolution. The final chapter could have been left out entirely.
Don’t get me wrong — these things don’t ruin the book entirely. There’s enough suspense with the consistent killings, the sketchy Temple employees, and the question of whether the ‘Wild Hunt’ is a hoax or not to keep you turning the pages. My issues were with a) the last chapter and b) how the paranormal aspects of the story were not always weaved together well with the normal. I like it to be apparent what genre book I’m reading. I don’t think this book knows what genre it is. If I had to categorize it, I’d have to say “crime thriller turned weird fantasy.” If that sounds appealing to you, you may truly enjoy this book. The seamless writing and suspense will certainly keep you entertained until the end.