The purpose of my blog is to seek out books with little to no reviews (based on Amazon and Goodreads) and determine if they deserve more attention. However I did not apply this logic when choosing to download Coexist (Keegan’s Chronicles #1) by Julia Crane. The book — the first of three in the series, which also inspired a few spin-off series — had plenty of reviews already on both websites. Most were four and five star, though there were a significant amount of one and two star reviews. I was intrigued by the split opinion, and by the premise of elves living in modern times. To top it off the ebook was free, so I thought I’d see what the fuss was about.
Young adult paranormal romance is one of the most written genres, which creates a struggle for authors to create a unique plot and carry a distinct voice. Unfortunately, this book reminded me of many others in its category. What bothered me more than this was the central character of this series. Keegan is the teenage elf protagonist living in a nondescript American suburb with her elvish family, all creatures of the ‘light.’ Her father is the leader of the good ‘light’ elves; throughout the book, he and Keegan’s genius younger brother along with the rest of her relatives train and prepare for the fast approaching Great Battle between the light and dark elves.
But Keegan couldn’t care less about preparing for the war between good and evil. She’s too busy shopping with her friends, buying clothes and having fun in general. To put it bluntly, Keegan is a spoiled brat with no concern for anyone but herself. Oh–maybe for her ‘chosen,’ the male elf who is destined to be her significant other from the age of eighteen when they meet for the rest of their lives. When Keegan isn’t whining to her parents (who are, mind you, still busy preparing for the Great Battle) about getting a custom made SUV for her birthday or about how she absolutely cannot wait to meet her ‘chosen,’ she’s busy going to Starbucks and the mall with her friends, all things she ‘loves.’ Oh–she also ‘loves’ the feel of the wind on her face. Just FYI.
Aside from the lead character, the one major flaw in the book was the scene where Keegan and Rourke, her chosen, meet for the first time. As much as I find the protagonist annoying, the key moment when the chosen pair meet could have been way better. For preceding chapters, everything is built up so that you expect this suspenseful, intense initial interaction. Instead the meeting lasts for barely a page. One minute Keegan and Rourke are complete strangers and the next they’re spinning around stupidly in a field, falling down and laughing. It comes off corny instead of romantic. They were irritating and I as the reader was disappointed.
Recall this review has two owls, not one. Why is that? Because I enjoyed Rourke’s character, as much as he reminds me of Edward Cullen from Twilight. As Keegan’s chosen and the love interest, Rourke is a brave, honest, caring, protective elf warrior — basically he has the polar opposite personality of Keegan. He lives by his morals, and he’s just all around the ideal love interest in this type of YA fantasy fiction. As much as I like Rourke’s character, I was equally frustrated with his scenes because he constantly is preoccupied with protecting oblivious Keegan who doesn’t deserve to be with such a good person.
Another reason I gave this book two owls is the battle sequence. I thought these last few chapters were the most captivating. Without giving too much away, the dramatic events that ensue in these scenes set up the sequel nicely. Not that I’m going to read the rest of the trilogy. But for everyone else I’ll say this: if you don’t think the protagonist’s shallow, bratty, somewhat obnoxious character traits would annoy you then perhaps you would enjoy this book. I’ll let you decide. For me, I know if I dislike the central character of a book, chances are I’m not going to love it.